I had a very good winter vacation.
The first week， my aunt and her family went back to grandmother’s home.
We went to have dinner with them.
The second week， we took H.S.R. to Kaoshung and visited my aunt and her family，
then we went to Lover River. It is very beautiful at night.
The last week was Chinese New Year. We ate New Year Eve dinner at grandmother，s house. I got many red envelopes. I was very happy this winter vacation.
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| 留言者：楊勝惠
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時間：2008/2/22
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Dear Vincent，
I visited Kaohsiung this winter vacation， too. I also had a nice walk by Love River.
I am glad to see your English writing on the website. Very good first time try.
Keep up your good work!
Ms. Yang
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| 留言者：蔡慧貞
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星幣值：+20 |
時間：2008/2/16
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段落分明, 標點正確, 前後呼應, 語句順暢, 輕鬆活潑, 心得貼切
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