Basketball is a very popular sport in Taiwan .
After school， I like to play basketball with
my good friends. Playing basketball can make
me grow taller . In the basketball court，
the audience like to see slamdunks and
three pointers . Players must move a ball
skillfully . A good player must practice
a lot . I’m good at jumping ball . But I’m
not good at free throw. Playing basketball
is good for my health.
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| 留言者：楊勝惠
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星幣值：+10 |
時間：2008/2/18
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Dear Brett，
Good sentence structure. Very good first time try on the website. I hope to see more of your English writing.
Ms. Yang
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| 留言者：蔡慧貞
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星幣值：+20 |
時間：2008/2/17
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詞句優美, 情節生動, 觀察入微, 標點正確, 語句順暢寫得很不錯唷！結尾若能再呼應前文，或是加上自己對學習籃球的期待會更完整。
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