Dear Mom,
It is very lucky because I am your daughter. I love you so
much. I want to make you happy every day. I wish to
see you smile every day. Your smile makes me happy.
Momi, you’re my best friend. I am happy to be with you.
Your daughter
Mag 2008/02/19
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| 留言者:林蔚玲
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星幣值:+10 |
時間:2008/2/26
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已經能寫簡單的句子很不錯
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| 留言者:審稿小組
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星幣值:+6 |
時間:2008/2/24
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語句順暢 ,但稍嫌短。
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