My name is David. I am nine years old.
I have a retty mother. she every day do housework.
She likes to play with me. She likes to sketch.
my younger brother he every day o shout.
He is very noisy. My sister her words is pretty.
he likes to think some thing.
My father he like to watching V and me.
I sometime go ice skating and play dodgeball.
Go wimming or play basketball and play soccer.
My hobby is atching moves.
My free time is collecting yo-yo.
They is y good family.
|
| 留言者：審稿小組
|
星幣值：+7 |
時間：2008/3/5
|
|
語句順暢, 錯字太多 ，請注意大小問題。
|
|
