Last vacation I visited my uncle in Taichung.On Friday I was took a train to Taichung station to visit my uncle. On saturday。
We went to a movie theatre and saw Crouching Tiger， Hidden Dragon
Before I went to the movie theatre，I thought it was very exciting on Sunday。We got up very early，because we went to climb a mountain.
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| 留言者：楊勝惠
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星幣值：+10 |
時間：2008/3/7
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Dear Timmy，
It sounds like a fun trip to Taichung.
Please note：
1. Don’t forget to capitalize "M" and "V". My Vacation
2. English period is "." not "。"
3. I took a train to Taichung Station.....
4. Crouching Tiger
4. Saturday
5. mountain
Very nice try!
Keep up your good work!
Ms. Yang
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