My favourite Taiwan star is Tank，He is a famous singer，I like his songs very much，because he has a good voice。
He lives in Taiwan，He has very good Chinese，I do not know what sport he loves.but I think he loves table tennis.He sings songs in his free time。
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| 留言者：楊勝惠
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星幣值：+8 |
時間：2008/3/10
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Dear Timmy，
Why is the title "My Favorite Taiwan"？ A better title is "My Favorite Singer". Be careful with your punctuation. （標點符號）
What is "loces"？ Do you mean "likes"？
Please read your writing again before you send it out.
Can you sing a song from Tank for us in English class？
Ms. Yang
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