Yesterday my father my btother my grandmother my grandfather and I went to Danshui by MRT。
Fist，we went to the beautiful beach，we played with the beach ball，had a sun bath and we swam in the water。
Then we went to the street，and we were hunger，so we ate lu-lou rice and oyster omelette，That was a unforgettable day。
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| 留言者：楊勝惠
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星幣值：+10 |
時間：2008/3/10
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Dear Timmy，
A better title is "My Journal".
Be careful with your punctuation and spelling.
Ms. Yang
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