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On that day，July 7，double lucky seven，my aunt took me and my cousin to beach. In the beginning，my cousin was afraid the sea，so he only played with the sand and made a sandcastle. He also picked some shells. When my aunt said“Wow， the water was cool.It’s fun.”My cousin decided to try it.And then he jump into the sea.He love it. He said that the water was more interesting than making sandcastle.I was surprise， the person who was afraid of the water was playing with it so crazy. Amazing!Anyway，it was interesting playing on the beach.
Not only this， there is a small stream beside the sea， in the stream there are many small fish， we try to catch them. It was very hard， beacause they were small and swimming very fast，but there was a good place to catch them， stone，they like to hide togather beside the stone.
After we went home，my cousin played with the water in the bathroom， when I ask for go in.He always answer me “wait!” That made me angry. But kind of amusing.
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| 留言者：黎文瑛
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星幣值：+20 |
時間：2008/3/24
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內容充實, 情節生動, 輕鬆活潑
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| 留言者：瑛瑛美黛子老師
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星幣值：0 |
時間：2008/3/24
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英文寫作是一個很大的挑戰，但是卻能給自己很大的成就感。
內容語句活潑，充分表達在海邊的樂趣，不僅是動態且有景色的描述，
棒極了！
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