A Boring Day
February 11th was a really boring day. The weather was terrible. It was very cold and it was raining very hard in Taipei so we couldn’t go anywhere. I hate wet days. My mom told us the next day was a school day so we couldn’t play Wii or any other games. We had to write our homework and practice English. That wasn’t fun at all.
After I finished my homework， I took a nap. When I woke up， I wanted to watch TV， but my mother still wouldn’t let me. She made me practice English. It was a really really boring day!!
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| 留言者：徐麗明
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星幣值：+10 |
時間：2008/7/5
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心得貼切
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| 留言者：吳貞瑩
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星幣值：+20 |
時間：2008/6/17
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內容充實, 語句順暢, 心得貼切, 注意標點 Minna：
You did a very good job! I even can feel your boredom!
However， you have to pay attention to the "comma" in English. It’s different from that in Chinese. In English， a comma is like this"，".
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