Everyone has had their own childhood. And everyone’s childhood is different ， some people had very colorful ones. Some people had very dangerous ones. Hundreds of years ago， some parents would sell their baby because they were so poor. My childhood was very colorful. My parents were very kind. They always asked me for my advice.
My father and mother would bring me to the other countries to play. I went to Australia when I was eighteen months old. That was my first travel. And we will go to an other country when the summer and winter vacations come. We always go to Japan because I like to buy and play the game in Japan .If I go to Japan in the winter vacation. I will get to see and play in the snow. If I go to Japan in the summer vacation， I will go to the Disney land to play and to eat ice cream.
Mychildhood was very colorful beause my parents always played with me. they would make me happy and if i got a bad score on my test，they would tell me not to be sad and to study hard. I want to thank my mother and father for leting me play and making me happy.
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| 留言者：審稿小組
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星幣值：+15 |
時間：2008/10/7
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內容充實, 語句順暢 ，父母對你真的很好，也很羨慕你可以到哪麼多國家去玩。
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